Post by lionhuntermo on Mar 10, 2012 9:11:33 GMT -5
The portal wasn't the problem. It was the fact that Gegaesse watched her come through it, and then proceeded to demand "How did you get in here?" -___- I fixed that part, but now I keep forgetting random pieces of the scene, like how she's barefoot, or the part where Gegaesse kicks the childrens' ball back...
And good luck with your characters then!
"There are three rules to writing. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are." ~The Romantic Trials and Troubles of Daisy Fraisier (Or "Why I should have been a Nun")~
Post by Agent Double Oh Zero on Mar 10, 2012 21:14:32 GMT -5
-_- Yeah, through the big gaping HOLE IN THE WALL, Gegaesse! xD
Aaaah. Yeah, it's perfectly natural to forget those! Either just make a note of them and move on, or fix them if you can do so without bogging yourself down. I know that I'd get so caught up in making what I had pretty, that I'd never move on! XD
"Like reflections on the page, the world's what you create." -Wither, by Dream Theater